Feedback on Rough cut

In last Thursday's lesson (25/10/12) some of our target audience watched our rough cut music video, we then asked them to fill out these feedback from, that are shown below here. So that we could get an idea of what they liked, what they think could be improved or changed. As this will help when we are re-filming for the final version of the music video. The feedback forms that were filled in are shown below here, to see them bigger click on the images and they will be made full screen.

The main things that our target audience said that we should improve on is the following:

• Not to film in the drama hall, find a new location for these parts. 
• The lighting in the performance parts.
• Performance needs to be more in focus.
• Alex hitting the chairs over in the drama hall, as the chairs are clearly school chairs.
• Video needs to be more fluent.
• Jack needs to learn to play the song on the keyboard better. 
• Try not to shoot into the sunlight (performance)

We will be improving on all of these things that have been said above about the improvements. That our target audience thinks that we should on for the final version of the music video.

We got some more improvements from some more of our target audience:

• Jack needs to have a stronger performance on the keyboard. 
• No smiling, when should not be.
• Make more of the black and white in the video. 
• Shorter frames. 
• Less running in the streets, there is too much of this.  
• Less stairs
• Re-shoot the shots in the drama hall, with a spotlight and the rest of the lights of. 
• When they are in the circle they need to whisper and move in on Alex. So it like they are closing in on him.
• Change the photo at the start of video.
• Needs to have more mise-en-scene. 

They also said some things that they liked about the rough cut of the video:

• They said that they liked all of the scenes on the metro.
• That the performance scenes are good, but need to be less dark. 
• Alex is good main character in the narrative.
• Narrative is good, really like the idea of the people turning grey.
• The punching of the glass.