Target Audience Feedback on Advert

We showed our first version of our advert to some of our target audience. Our advert is shown below here:

The feedback we received from our target audience is shown below:

• The date is to large, it needs to be a lot smaller.
• Don't like the way that the text is shaped around Alex. 
• Background is really interesting.
• Effect that is on Alex is good, like this effect. 
• The fraying of "includes the single lousing touch and five deluxe edition songs" needs to be changed. 
• There is to much text on the advert, there needs to be a lot less text. 
• Maybe put the title of the album over the top of the logo instead of under it. 
• Needs to be more space on the advert, as it look to busy.
• Maybe add other band members onto the advert.