Final version of Advert

Our final version of our advert, was also our third version. There is a link below, here that is to the our second version to our advert.

Advert version two

We made the improvements to the advert for the final version. We made the improvements that our target audience said that we could do, there is a link to this post below here.

Target audience feedback on version two

Shown below here is our final version of our advert:

For the final version of the advert, we made the changes to it that our target audience had given us from the second advert. So we added the black bar across the bottom of the page, which includes what the advert is for like our audience said we should have. This bar includes that it is for an deluxe edition digipack, vinyl and download.

Another thing that we changed for the final version of the advert, was that we made all of the band members look more clear and a bit less cartoon like by re-taking the photo's of their faces. You can see the difference if you compare the faces of the band members on this advert to their faces on the second version of the advert.

We also changed some of the quotes that are at the top of the advert, as our target audience pointed out that Kerrang don't give out stars they give out K. So we changed the stars to being form MOJO. We also changed the quote from NME magazine, as our audience said that this quote was to personal. So we changed the quote and changed how the quote was by. So now the quote is "A must have album" from iTunes.